Break, from the boundaries
Break, from the fear
Break, from this culture
Break, as if you don’t care
Break from the scripts and texts
Get rid of the shit that’s there
Break, from the notions
Break, and learn to dare
Break, all assumptions
All religions, all prayers
Break, from the ‘I’m right’
Break, to be fair
Break, to be selfish
Break, hate and despair
Break, free from illusions
Break, to be clear
And break the prison, and oh you should!
To see the light that’s there
And break those walls that you’ve made
Out of nothing but thin air!
6 comments:
man!! this is sooo awesome..
i've fallen for u!!!
that's flattering dear! Thanks so much :)
mast buddhe!!!!
ab mai kya criticize karunnn..hehe
n ya forgot to mention...this by far is ur best creation(poetic)..better than all your previous poems!
Always, open to criticism (and appreciation too :P)
And, no comments about those 'other' poems right now...
Good work buddy. Your poem follows the standards it speaks about (No boundaries) and I simply love free styling. Believe me when I say that I love no rules poetry, coz I've been doing some myself.
Very well "impex"ed. In case u r wondering what this is all about.....impex means implicit to explicit. Which means you have very well expressed whatever was cooking in that sub conscious of yours.
Keep penning!! Cheers
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